Sue's Clues
Sue's CluesHow do you do, my name is Sue and I've an empty nest which gives me time to spend in rhyme, pursuing it with zest. I keep our home but love to roam the country far and wide. Such sights I...
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Well done, Sue! Rolls right along. Good internal rhyme. Clever title.One suggestion - S3 L1 ' He is retired. The stress on is seems unnatural. How about He's now retired ?Good work, as always.jtb
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Thanks much, John.re S3, L1...Oh yes, I see...you are quite right and I like the fix ...appreciate it. Sue
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Bounces right along without a root in the way.Very nice, enjoyed.Merlin
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Dear Sue,Our muses have things in common. I wonder if they more or less write this form for you. I claim for mine, the first 4 words, then the muse simply fits words and thoughts into the established...
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Sue,This is a wonderful introduction for those yet to get to know you well. I have been reading for a while, so can't count myself in that category, I'm glad to say. Always a pleasure.the happy chappy
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Thanks Merlin. I've been working to get rid of those pesky roots along the path. SueThanks for checking this one out, Ron. It often happens as you describe in my case as well....however when I wrote...
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Sue, I read this earlier but didn't have time to comment. Just want to come back and say that I really enjoyed it. Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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Hi slue,My first chance to comment on a poem over here in the Factory.You gave many fine clues to help eople get to know you--and in such a smooth, rhythmecal way!I enjoyed, and hope to read many...
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I enjoyed your Sue's Clues,you've a style that can't lose,I'll continue to look for your name.You remind me of me...can it possibly bethat our muse is one and the same?Annie
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Well, Sue... nice to meet you...or, nice to know more about you anyway...We are "empty nesters" too...but not retired yet... I envy you the chance to travel... can't wait to get there.Regards,Wayne
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